本次作文的题目是 The Digital Age ，提供的提纲如下：
The Digital Age
It s an accepted fact that the digital age has come. The variety of digital products is accumulating steadily. MP3 and MP4 with fancy functions appeal to a wide range of people. Cell phones taking a large possession of digital markets are easily available now. Laptops are updating with a tremendous speed. On important occasions, Digital cameras and DV can always find their way there. Though it s possible to state there are more and more digital products, it is extremely difficult to list all.
第一段先扣题中 digital age ，然后用 is accumulate steadily. 概括提纲中的 越来越多 ，接下来要做的就是举例。第三册第41，47 等课文中都展示了如何列举例子，通常是用并列的结构，一句话一个例子，简洁但不乏高度概括性。段末再强调一下因为种类太多没办法一一列举，紧扣题旨。
Digital products are exerting remarkable influence on our study, work and daily life. They serve as helpful assistants to traditional classroom teaching. They enable us to work in a fast, effective and convenient way. As an essential part of our daily day, they almost have the same importance which food has for us. Just imagine we were deprived of the use of digital products. Needless to say, without them everything would be in a state of chaos. It is this excessive dependence that revealed their negative influence. To varying degrees, we have lost our independence and privacy.