coherence in writing
1.覆盖了所有的要点; 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇; 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分， 使全文结构紧凑。
代词 ?there is nothing important in today’s newspaper. you don’t have to read today’s newspaper. it ?if you are famous, people will watch you all the time and follow you everywhere. _______ could make your this life difficult.
同义词 care for ?i like sports. i also like music. ?then they went on with of the ascent. the climb was an extremely difficult one. 然后他们继续向上攀登，这是一次极 难的攀登。
同位语 ?i’m tom. i’m a boy of 16. i’m tom, a boy of 16. ?mr li is our new teacher. he is kind to us. mr li, our new teacher, is kind to us. ?my next stop would be jiuzhaigou. it’s a place in sichuan province. my next stp, i finished the work at last. because of
as a result of
2.more roads will have to be built with more cars, __________(所以)we’ll have less field to grow rice. so therefore
as a result/consequence,
he rent is reasonable, __________, the location is perfect. 房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。
what’s more in addition
______________(我认为) , students had better not buy a cell phone.
in my opinion
as far as i’m concerned
__________(总之), we should make good use of computer.
in a word/all in all
简单句： taking exercise does good to our health. 高级句式： __________________________________ , as we all know/as is known to all taking exercise does good to our health. 众所周知，锻炼对健康有好处。
简单句： it rained heavily. we had to stay at the hotel. 高级句式： it rained heavily;_____________, we had as a result to stay at the hotel.
简单句： i bought some fashionable clothes. i went to see a wonderful performance. 高级句式： i bought some fashionable clothes; ___________________, i went to see a besides/what’s more wonderful performance.
简单句： i was lost at the station. it was getting dark. 高级句式： i was lost at the station;________________, what’s worse it was getting dark.